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A cup of pessimism

with 19 comments

In the midst of mountains that failed to touch the sky,

A cup of coffee, half empty at heart, asks the question why…

Why is it, that success is not satisfying?

Why is it, that loneliness is terrifying?

Answers are missing…

At times, this restlessness can become an addiction

& setting of sun seems like a fiction.

What happens when missions collide with ambitions?

Will any of the two win? Or both will end up losing?

What I see now, is a rainbow of sun-rays.

Beautiful…

Unusual…

& powerful.

But, unknown…

 

Written by Dev

October 25, 2010 at 5:20 pm

19 Responses

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  1. 😯
    Am no good at poetry…so, let me not make uncalled for comments.

    Absolutely LOVED the lines:
    “At times, this restlessness can become an addiction
    & setting of sun seems like a fiction.”

    scorpria

    October 25, 2010 at 5:55 pm

  2. Very nice n beautifully written…
    Kya baat..kya baat..kya baat…🙂

    varun sikka

    October 25, 2010 at 11:17 pm

  3. Beautiful !!

    arvind

    October 26, 2010 at 12:52 am

  4. @Scorpria🙂

    @Varun Sikka
    Yeah yeah…

    @Arvind
    Beautiful?? Seriously? Thanks man!

    Dev

    October 26, 2010 at 3:21 pm

  5. very nice

    Princess

    October 26, 2010 at 8:49 pm

  6. nice lines.

    Reema

    October 26, 2010 at 11:41 pm

  7. Forget the missions and ambitions Dev! Rather channel them to get to an IVY league biggie. Only that can be a fitting reply to M**..🙂

    Romil Puri

    October 27, 2010 at 5:55 am

  8. @Princess
    @Reema
    Thanks

    @Romil
    Life is bigger than just education dude..😉

    Dev

    October 27, 2010 at 7:22 pm

  9. The verse you wrote is great. I love the “rhyming-couplets” (as you put it).

    Why we are not satisfied success? umm maybe its our biological way of using our brain, a fraction at a time. We finish one milestone, the next starts to frame up at a distance.🙂

    Ok, why not comment with some verses I wrote last year🙂 It does not have a title . . .

    —-

    Pardon me, I ask;
    For my ignorance and my insolence.
    But why doth my heart long,
    For things that concerns me or not.
    Why my mind doth ponder,
    Over matters significant or trivial.

    But lo! I submit myself,
    To the inherent calling of my being.
    To question and ask,
    The very foundations,
    Of the social contract,
    That binds the duality of Men.

    I try to comprehend, but nothing.
    I look but see not.
    I hear but listen not.
    For what pleases the heart and mind,
    Is perceived by the foundation,
    That builds the very structure,
    Of a complex being.

    Of what I know now,
    Is but little,
    Of what there is and will ever be.
    I doth try,
    To outwit the course,
    But to my utter dismay, I fail in discourse.

    But one thing I know now,
    Is that the World and its mysteries is big,
    Or as small as we perceive it to be. . .

    —Len

    —-

    Len Kamei

    October 28, 2010 at 2:58 pm

  10. very well written dev!! simple words wid a deep meaning..🙂🙂 i likes!!!😀

    neha kotwal

    October 29, 2010 at 9:24 pm

  11. @Len
    As usual, your comment is longer than my post🙂😦
    Awesome poem bro…really awesome!!

    @Neha
    Thanks Neha. The meaning is deep, but is floating at the surface.😉

    Dev

    October 30, 2010 at 3:36 pm

  12. grow up dude

    Romil Puri

    November 27, 2010 at 9:33 pm

  13. @Romil
    If dudes were dudes, they would not grow up!!😉

    Dev

    November 28, 2010 at 6:32 pm

  14. hm,pessimism..yet so beautiful somehow.

    blommer22

    December 1, 2010 at 3:22 pm

  15. @blommer22
    Thanks🙂

    Dev

    December 2, 2010 at 1:11 am

  16. Lovely. A powerful combination of optimism & pessimism.

    Shivya

    December 12, 2010 at 10:57 pm

  17. @Shivya
    Thanks…

    Dev

    December 26, 2010 at 10:54 am

  18. So many questions…as for the answers…you’ll know where to look when the time is right…in case you didn’t guess, I enjoyed this piece, thank you for sharing ~smiles~

    saffy

    January 6, 2011 at 3:41 am

  19. @Saffy
    Thanks saffy🙂
    Waiting for ‘that’ time to come

    Dev

    January 8, 2011 at 9:50 am


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